有關(guān)留言條或書信的英語作文
留言條 Note
一、留言條
假設(shè)你是李華，星期天你要和你的同班同學(xué)李明一起去敬老院參加義務(wù)勞動，你去找他，但他沒有在家 ，你給他留言說明要求，內(nèi)容如下：
(1)9：30在學(xué)校門口集合;
(2)帶勞動工具(洗衣粉、理發(fā)工具、除草工具等);
(3)自帶午飯，騎自行車前往。
注意：
(1)詞數(shù)100左右;(2)可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。
Dear Li Ming，
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Li Hua
【猜題理由】寫作題應(yīng)該是學(xué)生較為熟悉的、身邊的與他們生活、學(xué)習(xí)密切相關(guān)的話題。因?yàn)楦呖加幸欢ǖ倪B續(xù)性，2010年有些省份仍可能采用應(yīng)用文進(jìn)行考查。
【構(gòu)思點(diǎn)撥】本題屬于提綱式要點(diǎn)作文，要求學(xué)生就所給內(nèi)容寫一張留言條，是學(xué)生比較熟悉的題材，體現(xiàn)了英語學(xué)習(xí)應(yīng)該注意實(shí)用性，生活化的原則。應(yīng)注意下面幾點(diǎn)： (1)注意人稱，應(yīng)該用第一人稱的形式給同學(xué)李明(第二人稱)寫便條：(2)注意時態(tài)的正確使用：從試題的內(nèi)容上可以看出在表達(dá)要點(diǎn)上應(yīng)用將來時;(3)注意恰當(dāng)使用邏輯詞語，是各個要點(diǎn)間邏輯連貫，行文通順。提綱類書面表達(dá)不是簡單的逐條翻譯，而是將所給的幾個要點(diǎn)合理的組成比較通順的語句，因此要仔細(xì)組織語言，合理安排結(jié)構(gòu)。在語言方面，要特別注意簡潔明了，開門見山。
【參考范文】
Dear Li Ming,
This Sunday we'll go to the nursing home and do some voluntary labor. You were out, when I dropped in on you. Therefore, I had to leave a message to you. According to what monitor said, we'll meet at the gate of our school at 9:30 tomorrow morning and start out together by bike. So you should take your bike and don't forget to take some washing powder, barber tools and weeding tools so that we can help them with washing clothes, cutting their hair and get rid of some weed in the garden. At last, you should remember to take some food for lunch because we'll stay there for chatting with them at noon. If you come back, you'll phone me at once.
Li Hua
親愛的李明，
本星期日我們將去養(yǎng)老院做一些自愿的勞動。當(dāng)我在你的時候，你是我的。因此，我得給你留個口信。據(jù)班長說，我們會在我們學(xué)校門口在明天上午9:30開始一起騎自行車。所以你應(yīng)該把你的自行車，不要忘記帶上一些洗衣粉，理發(fā)工具和除草的工具使我們可以幫他們洗衣服，剪頭發(fā)，除去花園里的雜草。最后，你應(yīng)該記得帶些吃的午餐，因?yàn)槲覀儠谥形绾退麄兞奶�。如果你回來，你會打電話給我。
李華
中考英語滿分作文：給汶川孩子們的一封信 A Letter to the Children in Wenchuan
2008年5月12日，四川汶川發(fā)生了特大地震，數(shù)十萬人傷亡，數(shù)百萬人失去了家園，數(shù)萬孩子失去了校園。在此危難之時，全國人民眾志成城，抗震救災(zāi)，向?yàn)?zāi)區(qū)人民伸出了援助之手。假設(shè)你叫李偉（Li Wei），請你從學(xué)生的角度，以 A Letter to the Children in Wenchuan 為題，給災(zāi)區(qū)的孩子寫一封英文短信，以表達(dá)你的同情、關(guān)心、支持與鼓勵，讓他們盡快從地震的陰霾中走出來。
要點(diǎn)提示：同情 關(guān)心 支持 鼓勵 祝愿
提示性詞語：earthquake, kill, wound（致傷）, relatives, destroy, lonely, homeland, loveliest, whole-heartedly(全心全意地)，donate, overcome (克服), confidence, firm will (堅定的意志)，rebuild(重建) , pocket money (零花錢)
注意：（1）請盡可能使用所給的提示性詞語，但寫作不受所給詞語的順序限制.
�。�2）句式工整，書寫規(guī)范，語句條理性強(qiáng)，注意標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號。詞數(shù)：80個左右。
參考作文：
A Letter to the Children in Wenchuan
Dear little friends,
May12,2008 was the most terrible day for you, for me and for all the Chinese .The great earthquake killed and wounded your relatives, your teachers and your classmates, and destroyed your houses and schools badly. You felt very sad and our hearts were also broken deeply. However, you are not lonely. The loveliest people, such as the leaders, soldiers, doctors and volunteers, immediately arrived and helped you whole-heartedly. The people all over China are donating money, things or even their blood. I've also donated all my pocket money.
All these days I've been collecting the information from Wenchuan. Sometimes tears on my face while watching, listening or reading.
China is a big family. We are all your brothers and sisters. We will do everything to help you rebuild your homeland and make you be out of the endless pains. We are all together with you for ever. I believe you can overcome the difficulties with your confidence and the firm will. Please accept my heartfelt wishes: You'll be fine in the future.
Best wishes to you all !
Yours,
Li Wei
給汶川孩子們的一封信親愛的小朋友們，2008年5月12日你是最可怕的一天，我和所有的中國人。大地震中死亡和受傷的親人，你的老師和同學(xué)，并摧毀了你的房屋和學(xué)校嚴(yán)重。你覺得很傷心，我們的心也碎深深。然而，你并不孤獨(dú)。最可愛的人，如領(lǐng)導(dǎo)，軍人，醫(yī)生和志愿者，立即趕到，真心實(shí)意地幫助你。所有的中國人都捐了錢，事情甚至他們的血。我也捐出了我所有的零花錢。這些天我一直從汶川收集的信息。有時候，眼淚在我的臉上看，聽力或閱讀。中國是一個大家庭。我們都是你的兄弟姐妹。我們將盡一切努力幫助你重建你的家園，讓你擺脫無盡的痛苦。我們都和你在一起永遠(yuǎn)。我相信你能克服你的信心和公司的困難。請接受我衷心的祝福：你將來會被罰款。最好的祝福給你！真誠的祝福，李偉
a letter to a manager 求職信
Dear manager,
I will graduate from Beijing No.1 Middle School in July. I have studied English for six years. I’m interested in English very much. I am especially good at spoken English and typing, and my typing speed is 100 words a minute.
I can operate the personal computer and make programs for it. I can get information from the Internet and send information on business through it. If I’m accepted, I’ll work hard, and be a good worker.
Yours sincerely，
Li Lei
親愛的經(jīng)理,
我將于7月畢業(yè)于北京第一中學(xué)。我學(xué)英語已經(jīng)六年了。我對英語非常感興趣。我尤其擅長口語和打字,我的打字速度是每分鐘100個單詞。
我可以操作個人電腦和編程序。我可以從網(wǎng)上獲得信息和發(fā)送信息業(yè)務(wù)。如果我求職成功了,我會努力工作,是一個好工人。
你真誠的,
李雷
高考英語滿分作文及名師評析 寫信 Letter
高考英語滿分作文
【試題回放】
假定你是李華，正是英國牛津參加短期語言培訓(xùn)，計劃星期天去倫敦旅游�；ヂ�(lián)網(wǎng)上一則廣告引起了你的注意，但一些具體信息不明確(箭頭所指內(nèi)容)。請給該旅行社發(fā)一封電子郵件，詢問有關(guān)情況。
注意：1.詞數(shù)100左右，信的格式已為你寫好。
2.可根據(jù)內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。
3.參考詞匯：牛津——Oxford 費(fèi)用——fee
Dear Sir/Madame,
I’m writing for more information about the day tour to London.
As a student at Oxford University, I’d like to know if you have any special price for students. As for the money you charge, does it cover the entrance fees for visiting the places listed? What about lunch? Is it included? Or do I need to bring along my own food?
How long will the tour last? Since I need to prepare my lessons for the nest day, I’d like to know the time to return. Besides, is there any time for shopping? I really want to have a look at the big stores in London.
Yours,
Li Hua
尊敬的先生/女士，
我寫的更多的信息，在倫敦的一日游。
作為牛津大學(xué)的一名學(xué)生，我想知道你是否對學(xué)生有特殊的價格。至于你所收取的錢，它是否包括了所列地方的入場費(fèi)？午飯怎么樣？是否包括？還是我需要帶上我自己的.食物？
巡演將持續(xù)多久？因?yàn)槲倚枰獪?zhǔn)備好我的功課，我想知道的時間，返回。再說，還有沒有時間去購物？我真的很想看看倫敦的大商店。
你的，
李華
[名師點(diǎn)評]
本文是根據(jù)畫面的提示來寫一封電子郵件。作者在文章中首先把握了全部的要點(diǎn)，敘述較為完整;其次，作者運(yùn)用一些過渡句和銜接詞將文章串聯(lián)，意思連貫。文章中采用了第一人稱和一般現(xiàn)在時，這是值得肯定的地方。
【試題回放】假設(shè)你是李華，最近國內(nèi)一家英文報紙正在討論北京動物園是否應(yīng)遷出市區(qū)。以下是你所在班級討論的情況。請你給該報寫一封信，反映討論結(jié)果。
贊成遷出：反對遷出：
1.游客多，交通堵塞
2.郊區(qū)環(huán)境好1.建于1906年，中外聞名
2.搬遷易造成動物死亡
注意：1.詞數(shù)100字左右，信的開頭已為你寫好。
2.可根據(jù)內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。
3.參考詞匯： 郊區(qū)—suburb
Dear Editor ,
Recently ,in our class there has been a heated discussion about whether the Beijing Zoo should be moved out of the city . Some of my classmates are in favor of the move .They say large crowds of tourists to the zoo will result in traffic jams .They also say that once moved ,animals will have more space and better living conditions in the suburbs .However ,other students are against the idea ,saying that the Beijing Zoo, built in 1906 ,has a history of 100 years ,and is well –known at home and abroad .So it should remain where it is .What’s more ,moving may cause the death of some animals .To move or not ,this is a big decision which has to be made by people in Beijing.
Yours truly,
Li Hua
親愛的編輯，
最近，在我們班上，有一個激烈的討論，北京動物園是否應(yīng)該搬出城市。一些同學(xué)都贊成的舉動。他們說大量的游客到動物園將導(dǎo)致交通堵塞。他們還說，曾經(jīng)的感動，動物將有更大的空間和更好的生活條件在郊區(qū)。然而，其他學(xué)生都反對這個主意，說的北京動物園，建于1906年，有100多年的歷史，，好–已知在國內(nèi)和國外。所以它應(yīng)該保持，它是。什么是更多，移動可能會造成一些動物的死亡。移動或不，這是一個大的決定是由北京人。
你真正的，
李華
[名師點(diǎn)評]
這篇文章寫得還是比較精彩的。要點(diǎn)表達(dá)得完整而準(zhǔn)確，清楚展示了主題。先提出了文章的主題，進(jìn)而列出了贊成的觀點(diǎn)及其相關(guān)的理由，同時在其后又給出了反面的觀點(diǎn)，論據(jù)十分充足。文章結(jié)構(gòu)嚴(yán)謹(jǐn)，前后連貫。
【試題回放】
第一節(jié)情景作文(20分)
美國中學(xué)生jeff將要來你所在的紅星中學(xué)學(xué)習(xí)中文，經(jīng)協(xié)商安排住在你家。假設(shè)你是李華，請給Jeff寫一封信，按照下圖順序介紹他來中國后的生活安排。
注意：1. 信的開頭已為你寫好。
2.詞數(shù)不少于60。
Dear Jeff,
I’m Hua from Beijing Hongxing Middle School. I’m very happy to learn that you’re going to stay with my family while you’re in Beijing.
While you are here, we’ll provide you with a room of your own with a bed, a desk, a couple of chairs and a TV. You’ll also have your own bathroom. Our school is quite close to our home, so we could go to school together by bike. At noon we’ll eat at the school dining hall. I’m sure you’ll like the delicious Chinese food there, and enjoy talking with friends over lunch. Classes in our school usually finish at 4 in the afternoon. You can then join other students in playing ball games or swimming. It’ll be a lot of fun.
If you have any questions or requests, please let me know. We’ll try our best to make your stay here in Beijing a pleasant experience.
Best wishes,
Li Hua
親愛的杰夫，
我華從北京紅星中學(xué)。我很高興得知你在北京的時候會和我的家人在一起。
當(dāng)你在這里，我們會為你提供一個你自己的房間，一張床，一張桌子，幾把椅子和一臺電視機(jī)。你也有自己的浴室。我們學(xué)校離我們家很近，所以我們可以騎自行車去上學(xué)。中午我們在學(xué)校食堂吃飯。我敢肯定你會喜歡那里的美味的中國菜，喜歡和朋友一起吃午飯。我們學(xué)校的課程通常在下午4點(diǎn)完成。你可以和其他同學(xué)一起玩球類或游泳。這將是一個很大的樂趣。
如果您有任何問題或要求，請讓我知道。我們將盡我們最大的努力，使您在這里的逗留在北京愉快的體驗(yàn)。
最美好的祝愿，
李華
[名師點(diǎn)評]
這篇文章的特點(diǎn)還是比較清晰的，第一，作者根據(jù)圖畫將文章的要點(diǎn)概括完整，內(nèi)容充實(shí)而豐富，結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，有層次感;第二，本文沒有采用華麗的辭藻，但用詞十分恰當(dāng)，段落過渡自然，令人耳目一新。
A Letter to Lily 給莉莉的信
作文一：
Dear Lily,
How are you? You have known Beijing will be the host city of the 2008 Olympic Games, haven' t you? Everyone in Beijing is very excited. What should we do for the 2008 Olympic Games?
We are going to plant some trees in the West Lake Park this Saturday in order to make Beijing more beautiful.
We are very happy to do something for Beijing and the Olympic Games.
By the way I have two tickets for tomorrow' s film. Will you join me? Please phone me if you will.
Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Xiang
親愛的莉莉：
你好! 你已經(jīng)知道北京即將舉辦2008年的奧運(yùn)會的消息了，是嗎?北京人都很興奮。我們該為2008年的奧運(yùn)會做點(diǎn)兒什么呢?
為了把北京打扮得更美麗，我們星期六打算去西湖公園種樹。我們很高興能為北京，能為奧運(yùn)會做些事。
順便說一下，我有兩張明天的電影票，你是否愿意一起去?如果愿意，請給我打電話。
祝好!
你的朋友 李響
作文二：
Dear Lily,
How are you getting on recently? Maybe you have known the good news, but I still want to tell you that Beijing has been the host city of the 2008 Olympic Games. We were so excited that we jumped up. We laughed and laughed. We talked with everyone,even with strangers. We all want to do something for the 2008 Olympic Games.
In order to make Beijing more beautiful, we are going to plant some trees in the West Lake this Saturday. We are happy to have a chance to show our hearts.
By the way, would you like to see a film with me tomorrow?A new film is on at the Capital Cinema. If you will, please call me between 6:00 and 9:00 in the evening. OK?
Best wishes.
Yours,
Li Xia
親愛的莉莉：
近來可好?也許你已經(jīng)知道了，但是我還是要告訴你北京已經(jīng)成為2008年的奧運(yùn)會主辦城市了。我們激動地都跳起采了。我們笑啊，笑啊。我們和每個人，甚至是陌生人說啊，說啊。我們都想為奧運(yùn)會做點(diǎn)兒事。
為了使北京變得更漂亮，我們這個星期六要去西湖公園種樹。我們很高興有這個機(jī)會表示我們的心意。
順便問一下，明天你愿不愿意和我一起去看電影?首都電影院在上演一部新片。如果愿意，請在晚上六點(diǎn)至九點(diǎn)給我打電話，好嗎?
你的朋友 李響
中考英語作文范文（書信）
Dear David,
I'm glad you'll come to Beijing to learn Chinese. Chinese is very useful, and many foreigners are learning it now. It's difficult for you because it's quite different from English. You have to remember as many Chinese words as possible. It's also important to do some reading and writing. You can watch TV and listen to the radio to practise your listening. Do your best to talk with people in Chinese. You can learn Chinese not only from books but also from people around you. If you have any questions, please ask me. I'm sure you'll learn Chinese well.
Hope to see you soon in Beijing.
Yours,
Wang Ming
親愛的戴維，
I'm glad you'll come to Beijing to learn Chinese. Chinese is very useful, and many foreigners are learning it now. It's difficult for you because it's quite different from English. You have to remember as many Chinese words as possible. It's also important to do some reading and writing. You can watch TV and listen to the radio to practise your listening. Do your best to talk with people in Chinese. You can learn Chinese not only from books but also from people around you. If you have any questions, please ask me. I'm sure you'll learn Chinese well.
我很高興你會來北京學(xué)習(xí)中文。中國是非常有用的，許多外國人都在學(xué)習(xí)。對你很難，因?yàn)樗陀⒄Z完全不同。你必須記住盡可能多的中國話。同樣重要的是做一些閱讀和寫作。你可以看電視，聽廣播練習(xí)你的聽力。你最好跟人在中國。你可以從書本中學(xué)習(xí)漢語不但而且從你周圍的人。如果你有任何問題，請告訴我。我相信你會學(xué)好中文。
Hope to see you soon in Beijing.
希望早日在北京見到你。
Yours,
真誠的，
Wang Ming
王明
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