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　　英語四級作文題目預(yù)測：My View on Double BA Degree

　　1. 現(xiàn)在大學(xué)生讀雙學(xué)位的現(xiàn)象很常見

　　2. 我對這一現(xiàn)象的看法

　　【作文范文】

　　Recently it has become a common phenomenon for college students to have two majors at the same time. In this way, they can get double BA degrees when they graduate from the university several years later.

　　Although it may bring unfavorable consequences, we can be sure to conclude that this practice is favorable on the whole. To begin with, most students will become more hardworking and efficient in order to finish the learning tasks satisfactorily. Moreover, with two degrees at hand after graduation, they will stand a better chance in the job market full of fierce competition. In the third place, as for today's university students, tuition and fees are becoming more and more expensive. If they can make achievements in study at school and find a satisfactory job afterwards, it will not be a big problem.

　　Weighing the pros and cons of such a new trend, we can naturally arrive at the conclusion that it is beneficial and rewarding. This system not only compels students to work hard, but also prepares them for the coming competition.

　　【點評】

　　首段直接點題，說明現(xiàn)象;第二段分述三個優(yōu)點，其中首句為讓步狀語從句，意思是“雖然可能帶來負面的后果，但總體上是有益的”;第三段呼應(yīng)第二段，得出結(jié)論。

　　范文首段提出大學(xué)生讀雙學(xué)位這一普遍現(xiàn)象;第二段分三點進行論述，其中前兩點是優(yōu)點，即學(xué)生會更加勤奮，并且有利于他們在激烈的求職市場中找到工作，最后一點是解釋可能帶來的學(xué)費問題并不嚴重;第三段下結(jié)論，呼應(yīng)第二段。

　　第二段第三句中的stand a better chance(of)表示“大有希望”;第三段末句中的compel sb.to do sth.表示“迫使某人做某事”。

　　英語四級作文題目預(yù)測：Teenagers' Studying Abroad

　　1. 現(xiàn)在有很多青少年出國留學(xué)

　　2 有些人認為這種做法是有益的

　　3 我認為這種觀點是不的

　　【范文】

　　Recently it seems that among the students who choose to study abroad, there are more and more-teenagers who study in high schools or even elementary schools. Many people, especially the parents, think it will certainly do good to their chidren because the independent life will make them learn confidence and perseverance. Moreover, the quality of overseas education is often higher, thus the child stands a better chance of entering a better university and getting a better job in the future.

　　After careful consideration, I have to say the above view is more than biased. On the one hand, early independent life is not necessarily good, if the child cannot receive proper guidance and tender care from both teachers and parents. On the other hand, the educational quality is also a question—too many foreign schools aim at earning money. When the children come back, who can guarantee that they can adapt to the fierce competition here?

　　We can see clearly that although teenagers' studying abroad may bring favorable results, there are still a lot to worry about. It seems necessary for young students to make a careful investigation before going abroad.

　　【點評】

　　第一段指出當(dāng)前某種普遍的做法，之后分兩點闡述人們支持這種做法的原因;第二段首句鮮明地指出自己反駁的意見，然后分兩點來闡述理由;最后一段進行總結(jié)，并請當(dāng)事人在做出決定前多加斟酌。

　　范文首句點題，指出青少年留學(xué)這一現(xiàn)象，并給出支持者的理由，即獨立的生活會教會他們自信和堅持不懈，而且國外的教學(xué)水平會讓學(xué)生進入更好的大學(xué)、找到更好的工作。第二段給出反對理由。首先，早期獨立不一定是件好事。另外，太多的國外學(xué)校的目標(biāo)是掙錢，所以它們的教學(xué)質(zhì)量是令人質(zhì)疑的。末段總結(jié)說青少年留學(xué)可能會帶來好處，但令人擔(dān)憂的問題也很多。

　　第一段第三句中的stand a better chance of表示“有更好的機會做某事”。第二段首句中的biased表示“偏激的，存有偏見的”;第三句中的aim at表示“目的在于”;第四句中的guarantee表示“保證”，adapt to表示“適應(yīng)”，fierce表示“激烈的”，修飾competition(競爭)。

　　英語四級作文題目預(yù)測：The Internet

　　1. 有人認為網(wǎng)絡(luò)可以讓學(xué)習(xí)、工作更有效率

　　2. 有人卻認為網(wǎng)絡(luò)讓青少年沉迷，影響學(xué)習(xí)

　　3. 我的看法

　　【范文】The Internet

　　In the era of information and technology, the Internet plays an important role in our

　　society. However, people’s opinions are still divided on this point. Those who are in favor of the Internet claim that it has a lot of advantages. Firstly, information searching is no longer a tough job with the help of all kinds of search engines. Secondly, we can contact friends or business partners via e-mails or software such as Internet Meeting and Yahoo Messenger.

　　Those who are opposed to the Internet hold that its disadvantages are numerous. In the first place, using the Internet costs considerable time, money and energy, especially for those with poor self-control. In the second place, increasing young people are indulged in online games and unhealthy information, which are extremely harmful to their development.

　　In my opinion, its pros outweigh the cons. The past twenty years have witnessed the fast development of the Internet along with the national economy. A brighter future is awaiting us if we make good use of the Internet.