雅思大作文開頭改寫分析
導(dǎo)語(yǔ)：好的開始是成功的一半，雅思大作文的寫作也逃不過這個(gè)道理。但是在實(shí)際操作的過程中很多同學(xué)往往不重視雅思大作文開頭句的寫作；而是簡(jiǎn)單套用一些自認(rèn)為比較優(yōu)秀的現(xiàn)成的模板，殊不知考官閱卷無(wú)數(shù)，通常這樣做給考官留下背誦模板的感覺，這樣一來(lái)，即使你主體部分寫的再好恐怕也回天乏術(shù)了。下面是小編為大家分享的雅思大作文開頭改寫分析相關(guān)內(nèi)容，歡迎閱讀。
雅思大作文開頭改寫分析 篇1
1） 場(chǎng)景或背景信息，即題目中出現(xiàn)的phenomenon.
2） 一些人的觀點(diǎn)（some people’s opinion）,這部分在改寫文章首段時(shí)可要可不要，考生可按照自己的情況來(lái)安排。
3） 個(gè)人觀點(diǎn)，這一部分在有些文章的開頭首段中也可以不要。
大作文要求字?jǐn)?shù)至少達(dá)到250字，在寫作中考慮到字?jǐn)?shù)的合理安排，第一段最好寫3-5句話，大約40字左右，并且切忌在第一段就掏心掏肺把什么話都說完。因此總結(jié)出大作文開頭的'方式通常有以下幾種情況：
1） 題目中包含了背景信息（phenomenon）,有時(shí)也出現(xiàn)一些人的觀點(diǎn)，并且題目中字?jǐn)?shù)較多。這種情況下最保險(xiǎn)的辦法是將題目中的背景信息及一些人的觀點(diǎn)重新表達(dá)（paraphrase）,可以做：
主動(dòng)語(yǔ)態(tài)換成被動(dòng)語(yǔ)態(tài)
主謂賓換成主系表
某些近義詞互換
Example:
At present,it is hard for college students to find jobs.Many people claim that college teachers should give priority to practical courses like computer science and business over such traditional ones as history and geography.To what extent do you agree
_____轉(zhuǎn)換成
The number of college graduates is surging while a substantial proportion of them have difficulties in finding employment after their graduation.Numerous people blame this on the university education and believe that more emphasis should be laid on practical courses such as computer science and business than on traditional courses like history and geography.
其后再加考生自己的觀點(diǎn)即可。
2） 題目中包含了背景信息，有時(shí)出現(xiàn)一些人的觀點(diǎn)，但題目中字?jǐn)?shù)較少，若直接重新表達(dá)，字?jǐn)?shù)湊不到40字左右。這種情況下，推薦以下兩種開頭方式來(lái)保證字?jǐn)?shù)：
把籠統(tǒng)信息細(xì)節(jié)化即通過舉例來(lái)解釋說明題目中的背景信息。
Example:
International tourism has become a big industry in the world.Do the benefits outweigh the problems
轉(zhuǎn)換為
The acceleration of globalization and high-tech development contributes to International tourism’s gaining momentum virtually all over the world.Each year,millions of tourists from other countries swarm into China to appreciate the scenery and Chinese traditional culture.
其后加入考生個(gè)人觀點(diǎn)即可。
追溯歷史，過去與現(xiàn)在形成對(duì)比。
Example:
International tourism has become a big industry in the world.Do the benefits outweigh the problems
轉(zhuǎn)換為
Prior to the early 1900s,the proportion of people traveling abroad was considerably low and the majority of them preferred domestic travel.However,the advent of the motorized flight has greatly changed our life and it makes international traveling more convenient.International tourism is gaining momentum and has become a big industry.
其后加入考生個(gè)人觀點(diǎn)即可。
3） 題目中僅出現(xiàn)一部分人的觀點(diǎn)，而沒有背景信息。這種情況下，我們可以根據(jù)這部分人
的觀點(diǎn)所涉及的信息在開頭段附加對(duì)背景信息的描述。
Example:
The best way to solve the world’s environmental problem is to increase the price of fuel.Do you agree or disagree
轉(zhuǎn)換為
In the process of industrialization and urbanization,the scope of environmental problem facing the world is getting immense.From Mexico City and New York to Singapore and China new solutions to this problem are being proposed,tried and implemented.Some people believe increasing the price of fuel is the best approach to this problem.
其后加入考生個(gè)人觀點(diǎn)即可。
另外，要提醒考生注意的是開頭段一定要避免出現(xiàn)語(yǔ)法錯(cuò)誤，因?yàn)槿绻Z(yǔ)法錯(cuò)誤影響文章的理解，那會(huì)給考官留下極差的第一印象，而考官也就沒有信心繼續(xù)往下讀了，最終大作文的得分也不會(huì)很高。
雅思大作文開頭改寫分析 篇2
寫好雅思大作文開頭段要素一：現(xiàn)象句
雅思寫作考題中會(huì)出現(xiàn)一個(gè)社會(huì)現(xiàn)象，考生的任務(wù)就是在自己文章的第一句話將之改寫，重述這個(gè)社會(huì)現(xiàn)象。
E．g．1
Nowadays we are producing more and more rubbish．Why do you think this is happeningWhat can governments do to help reduce the amount
of rubbish produced
It is true that in almost every country today each household and family produces a large amount of waste every week．
寫好雅思大作文開頭段總結(jié)——套句+同義詞替換：more and more= a large amount of
E．g．2
Some people believe that children should be allowed to stay at home and play until they are six or seven years old．Others believe that it is important for young children to go to school as soon as possible．What do you think are the advantages of attending school from a young age
In many places today, children start primary school at around the age of six or seven．
寫好雅思大作文開頭段總結(jié)——
主被動(dòng)之間的轉(zhuǎn)換：should be allowed to stay at home = start their primary school同義詞的替換：until they are six or seven years old = at the age of six or seven
E．g．3
In some countries young people are encouraged to work or travel for a year between finishing high school and starting university studies．Discuss the advantages and disadvantages for young people to do this．
It is quite common these days for young people in many countries to have a break from studying
after graduating from high school．
寫好雅思大作文開頭段總結(jié)——
主被動(dòng)之間的轉(zhuǎn)換，以及同義替換：finish high school = graduate from high school
所以，從上文中可以看出，一般來(lái)說，現(xiàn)象句會(huì)在最開始加上一個(gè)套句，并且加上地點(diǎn)和時(shí)間。
雅思大作文開頭段經(jīng)典套句：
1．It is true that… …是真實(shí)的
2．I tend to agree that… 我同意…
3．It is quite common… …是常見的
4．There is no doubt that… …是毫無(wú)疑問的
5．There is no denying that… …是毫無(wú)疑問的
6．It is undeniable that… …是毫無(wú)疑問的
地點(diǎn)：in many places; in many countries; in many big cities; almost every country/ city/ place時(shí)間：in recent decades/ years; today; these days; recently; nowadays
寫好雅思大作文開頭段要素二：點(diǎn)到問題
雅思大作文考題分成兩種：report & argumentative。
對(duì)于report（題目一般會(huì)涉及到why do you think it is important to…; how do you think people can tackle this problem．）
E．g．4
In many countries schools have severe problems with student behavior．
What do you think are the cause of this
What solutions can you suggest
Poor student behavior seems to be increasingly widespread problem and I think that modern lifestyles are probably responsible for this．
寫好雅思大作文開頭段總結(jié)—— 點(diǎn)到了causes--直接把原因泛泛的帶領(lǐng)出來(lái)，全文的第二段再開始慢慢細(xì)致的描述。
E．g．5
Happiness is considered to be very important in life．
Why is it difficult to define
What factors are important in achieving happiness
Happiness is very difficult to define, because it means so many different things to different people．While some people link happiness to wealth and material success, others think it lies in emotions and loving personal relationships．Yet others think that spiritual paths, rather than either the material world or relationships with people, are the only way to true happiness．
寫好雅思大作文開頭段總結(jié)——
點(diǎn)到了why difficult--通過引用兩組不同人的觀點(diǎn)，把造成這個(gè)現(xiàn)象的原因大致導(dǎo)出，與上一個(gè)例子有異曲同工之妙。
對(duì)于argumentative（do you agree or disagree; discuss both views and give your opinion．; is it a positive or negative development），這種題型基本上都問了作者的觀點(diǎn)，所以在開頭段落的描寫過程中沒什么特別大的區(qū)別。
E．g．6
Using a computer every day can have more negative than positive effects on young children．Do you agree or disagree
I tend to agree that young children can be negatively affected by too much time spent on the computer every day．
寫好雅思大作文開頭段總結(jié)——
改寫題目+主動(dòng)變被動(dòng)：have more negative than positive effects on = can be negatively affected by
直接表達(dá)自己的觀點(diǎn)：I tend to agree that
E．g．7
Some people feel that entertainers (e．g．film stars, pop musicians or sports stars) are paid too much money．
Do you agree or disagree
Which other types of job should be highly paid
I agree with the view that stars in the entertainment business are usually over paid．This is true whether we are considering stars of film, sport or popular music, and it often seems that the amount of money they are able to earn in as short time cannot possibly be justified by the amount of work they do．
寫好雅思大作文開頭段總結(jié)——
現(xiàn)象+觀點(diǎn)
E．g．8
Increasing the price of petrol is the best way to solve growing traffic and pollution problems．To what extent do you agree or disagree
What other measures do you think might be effective
There is no doubt that traffic and pollution from vehicles have become huge problems, both in cities and on motorways everywhere．Solving these problems is likely to need more than a simple rise in the price of petrol．
總之，如果要寫出一篇較好的雅思作文，環(huán)球托福建議考生們?cè)谘潘即笞魑拈_頭段落的描寫方面絕對(duì)要達(dá)到快速和準(zhǔn)確這兩個(gè)要求，把時(shí)間控制在5分鐘之內(nèi)，把字?jǐn)?shù)把握在30-40個(gè)單詞之間。
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