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假如你是Maria，剛剛度假回來(lái)。給你的筆友比爾寫(xiě)一封信，告訴他你假期的一些情況。信中一定要包括以下要點(diǎn)：
1. When and where did you go?
2. What was the weather like there?
3. Who did you go with?
4. What did you do there?
5. What do you think of the food and people there?
6. How do you feel about your vacation?
詞數(shù)：60詞以上
一、 文章需要包括內(nèi)容
什么時(shí)候、什么地點(diǎn) 天氣 誰(shuí) 做了什么
食物和人 感受
二、 分段 – 文章框架
總 – 介紹什么時(shí)候什么地點(diǎn)和誰(shuí)去的
分 – 天氣怎么樣，食物怎么樣，人怎么樣
總 – 感受
三、 語(yǔ)言修飾 高分詞匯、高分句型 過(guò)渡詞
四、 檢查錯(cuò)誤
語(yǔ)法錯(cuò)誤(時(shí)態(tài)) 拼寫(xiě)錯(cuò)誤 標(biāo)點(diǎn)錯(cuò)誤
in June, I go to the qingdao. The qingdao’s weather is very good is a sunny. I go to there with my mother. The Qingdao is very Beautiful。 but the food is not very good. the people is very
friendly.
I think the vacation is very very nice and irleratioual.
出現(xiàn)問(wèn)題：
字?jǐn)?shù)少 語(yǔ)法錯(cuò)誤 拼寫(xiě)錯(cuò)我
標(biāo)點(diǎn)錯(cuò)誤 低分詞匯、低分句型
二、 分段 – 文章框架
總 – 介紹什么時(shí)候什么地點(diǎn)和誰(shuí)去的
分 – 天氣怎么樣，食物怎么樣，人怎么樣
總 – 感受
三、 語(yǔ)言修飾
• 高分詞匯、高分句型
• 過(guò)渡詞
第一段： 總 – 介紹什么時(shí)候什么地點(diǎn)和誰(shuí)去的
我上個(gè)月和我的家人去了海南島。海南島在中國(guó)的南方，是一個(gè)漂亮的地方，以美麗的海灘聞名。
分 – 天氣怎么樣，食物怎么樣，人怎么樣
那里的天氣和北京的不一樣。換句話說(shuō)，那里的天氣一直很濕熱。 有時(shí)候溫度會(huì)達(dá)到40度。我們參觀了很多名勝，比如說(shuō)天涯海角、亞龍灣。最讓我印象深刻的就是那的海鮮，很美味。我最喜歡的是姜汁炸大蟹。還有，那里的人對(duì)我們很有好。無(wú)論何時(shí)何地我們有任何困難, 比如說(shuō)迷路了，海南人總是樂(lè)于幫助我們。
總 – 感受
我覺(jué)得在海南島的度假是我有史以來(lái)最好的一個(gè)假期，甚至比我美國(guó)的假期還好呢。我希望我冬天能再去。
我上個(gè)月和我的家人去了海南島。
I went to Hainan island with my family last month.
海南島在中國(guó)的南方，是一個(gè)漂亮的地方，以美麗的海灘聞名。 Hainan, an island in the south of China, is a really beautiful place, which is well-known for its beautiful beaches.
仿寫(xiě)：主語(yǔ) + 同位語(yǔ)+謂語(yǔ)+賓語(yǔ)+定語(yǔ)從句.
連云港， 一個(gè)位于中國(guó)東部的城市， 中國(guó)一個(gè)重要的港口城市， 以美麗的風(fēng)光聞名;
e.g. Lianyungang, a city in the east of China, is an important port city in China, which is also known as its beautiful scenery .
e.g. 老圓子， 一個(gè)美麗的女孩，是新東方的一名英語(yǔ)老師， 她每天在“倫敦”呆至少三個(gè)小時(shí).
e.g. Vera, a beautiful girl, is an English teacher in New Oriental School, who stays in London for at least 3 hours.
那里的天氣和北京的不一樣。換句話說(shuō)，那里的天氣一直很濕熱。有時(shí)候溫度會(huì)達(dá)到40度。
The weather there was different from that in Beijing. In other
words, it was wet and hot all the time. Sometimes the temperature can reach 40 degrees centigrade.
仿寫(xiě)：表示解釋的關(guān)聯(lián)詞： in other words, by that I mean, that means
e.g. My friend KK is very hardworking and also likes to play basketball, in other words, she work hard and play hard.
我們參觀了很多名勝，比如說(shuō)天涯海角、亞龍灣。
We visited some well-known places of interest/tourist attractions , such as Tianyahaijiao, Yalongwan and so on.
仿寫(xiě)：表示舉例的關(guān)聯(lián)詞： such as (后加名詞)， for example(加句子)
and so on 諸如此類(lèi)， 等等
最讓我印象深刻的就是那里的海鮮，很美味。
What impressed us most was the sea food there.
It was very yummy.
仿寫(xiě)：What impressed us most is/was ….最讓我們印象深刻的是….
e. g. What impressed me most is KK’s face. She looks so beautiful. 我最喜歡的是姜汁炸大蟹。
What I liked best was fried fresh crab with ginger sauce.
What impressed us most was the sea food there.
What impressed us most was the sea food there, of which I like fried fresh crab with ginger sauce the best.
還有，那里的人對(duì)我們很有好。無(wú)論何時(shí)何地我們有任何困難, 比如說(shuō)迷路了，海南人總是樂(lè)于幫助我們。
What’s more, people there were quite friendly to us. Whenever and wherever /No matter when and where we had some problems, for example, we got lost, people in Hainan were always ready to help us.
仿寫(xiě)：what’s more, in addition, moreover, furthermore, “而且”高級(jí)邏輯連接詞， 替代可憐兮兮的and， then等;
還有，那里的人對(duì)我們很有好。無(wú)論何時(shí)何地我們有任何困難, 比如說(shuō)迷路了，海南人總是樂(lè)于幫助我們。
What’s more, people there were quite friendly to us. Whenever and wherever /No matter when and where we had some problems, for example, we got lost, people in Hainan were always ready to help us.
仿寫(xiě)：be ready to do sth. 樂(lè)于做某事。
我覺(jué)得在海南島的度假是我有史以來(lái)最好的一個(gè)假期，甚至比我美國(guó)的假期還好呢。
In my opinion, the vacation in Hainan island is the best one (that)
I have ever had, even better than the one in US.
仿寫(xiě)：in my opinion, “as far as I am concerned”, “as to me”, “personally speaking, I think”我認(rèn)為”高級(jí)邏輯連接詞， 替代可憐兮兮的I think, I believe等;
我希望我冬天能再去。
I hope I can be there again next winter.
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